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I want you to take me
Like you’ve never taken anyone before,
Like you’ve never touched, felt, held anyone
Like you’ve never wanted, craved, anyone—
Anything.

Like you’ve never needed.

I want you to touch me
Like you’ve just discovered your hands,
To look at me
Like you’ve never had the power of sight.

I want you to love, love, love me
Like it’s keeping you alive,
Like I’m the organs, arteries, cells that keep you breathing.

But mostly—
I want you to have
Touched
Seen
Felt
Wanted
Craved
Loved
Plenty of times before.

But realize--
I am the one
that makes you believe it’s the first time
and know it’s the last time,
any of that will ever happen
with anyone

but

me.
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oh..... love.........
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:iconpunchika:
my God! i'm reading this poem over and over again..day after day..it makes me feel just a bit better every time I do.
It really is an emotional and touchy peace. Please, write another one like this.
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:iconmothermoon:
nice creative expression- wouldn't really want to be your mate though, if that your definition of love.
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:iconlady-divine:
lovely lovely!!!!!!! :love:

do read my posts and comment if you can..:)
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~LoveShotEyes Mar 2, 2008  Student Writer
This is an insanely beautiful piece. So powerful.
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:iconemonemodan:
that's friggin awesome !!! haha.
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~Mithriltear Mar 1, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
love is selfish^^ but it sure is soo cute! keep up the good work!
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Mood: Joy ~Marshmellow-06 Mar 1, 2008   Photographer
oh love :) x
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